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The graphs below show the employment rate of each gender in four different contries in 2002


Nbhuong 1 / -  
Nov 21, 2023   #1
The bar chart gives information about the employment rate of men and women in four nations (South Africa, Chile, Finland and Norway) in 2002.
Overall, it is clear that the occupaion percentage of men was higher than that in women in fours countries, and the largest gap between two gender categories was in Chile.

About 80% Norway's men was in workforce, which was the highest rate in 2002. The employed Chile and Finland men was nearly equal, with the figure being just under 70%while the men had job in South Africa was the shortest, at 50%.

In terms of the employment proportion of women, there was roughly 75% in Norway where lead the employed women compared to other countries. The rate for Finland was lower by 10%, but being double than South Africa and Chile, at exactly 35% and 32%, respectively.

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Holt  Educational Consultant - / 14,974 4811  
Nov 27, 2023   #2
I do not need to read the topic or see the image to know that this is not an essay that will gain a passing score. It is under discussed and does not provide a complete insight into the given discussion. There is a 150 word count minimum that the essay had to meet. You only wrote 144 words. So you did not meet the primary scoring requirement. You will instead, receive percentage deduction points because of the missing 6 words. That is too bad. You could have done a better job at analysing the essay to meet that requirement. You just needed to extent the study of the information by a few more words and you would have avoided that penalty.


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