A group is able to find better solutions that if they were to try to solve the problem individually

working as a group

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
When people solve problems as a group, they come up with better solutions that if they were to try to solve the problem individually. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Teresa said that "There is nothing more terrible than to be alone among human beings". It is clear that when we have a problem in the life if we become a solitary person, we will face difficulty to find solutions in any situation. From my perspective, I agree that working as a group not only results in better solutions than individually but also carry an efficient and progressive process.

Firstly, working as a group can finish their tasks in more efficient manner. As a person not always has a suitable competency to solve or analyze the problem. Therefore, the knowledge and skills of each member a group can also be used to strengthen a solution. For example, in many sports such as football, a player would not scorer if not helps from the team. Moreover, working with a team will help people save time, solve complex problems and to complete a difficult task faster. In addition, working in a group may bring responsibility for team member because they know that their work will directly result in whole group.

Secondly, working as a group help people become more creative. Teamwork helps in increasing collaboration and has a scope for brainstorming which results in getting more ideas. As a result of the exchange of ideas can act as a stimulus to the imagination, encouraging individuals to explore ideas they would not otherwise consider. Moreover, the people can improve their skills while working as a group. For example, a team will be having people with different skill and abilities such as communication, presentation or leadership so that working closely with others, the people will have more chances to share various work experiences, educational background.

From the reasons mentioned above, I believe that working as a group brought advantages to people not only solution efficient but alo necessary skills in work as well as life.

Hi
I think your essay has quite adequate explanations for your opinion but you have failed in using tense, verbs and grammar pretty much:
if not helps from the team => not be helped or gets help
problems and to complete => complete
Teamwork helps people increase both collaboration and brainstorming ability
Shorten this one: It is clear that when we have a problem ...

and so on
Hope that helps

I think you face a problem with plural:
manners
difficulties
to complete
a group help-> helps
the people
efficient solutions

Jerry, quick question, who is Teresa and why should I care about her quotation in the essay? How does that relate to the prompt paraphrase? Don't use unnecessary quotes or any quotes for that matter in a TOEFL essay. Just respond directly to the question in a manner that appropriately paraphrases the original topic. Actually, without the quotation, your response to the given prompt is actually very good and offers an insight into the succeeding discussion.

However, your essay is not helped by your multiple examples in paragraph 2. Use only one example that you can fully explain or support in relation to your prompt agreement. That way you end up with a cohesive and coherent paragraph rather than an under developed and little discussed reasoning as you currently have in your presentation.

It would have been better if you fully summarized the presentation using the 3 sentence presentation instead of a run-on sentence that actually changes the prompt discussion because the focus went from agree/disagree to advantage/disadvantage in your closing paragraph.