The happiness of married and single inhabitants is influenced by different factors

The charts the results of a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried people in the US, and the effect of children on the overall ratings of married couples.

A survey result about happiness levels for married and unmarried society and having kids effect can be seen in the bar charts. Overall, at the first glance, it can be seen that married inhabitants is happier than unmarried people. Also, having children brings more happiness than having no children.

To begin, relationship as couple has different happiness rate depend on their age. The highest level of this is on under a third century couple which has 45 percent, while the lowest is on middle aged couple at 40 percent. On the other hand, the happiest person on unmarried people is over 64 aged society at just above a third, while the least are young people and middle aged people who have same level at 21 percent.

The happiness of married inhabitants is influenced by children factor also. Having children under 18 age brings the greatest happiness at 44 percent while having children who have more than 18 age has the least percentage at 41. Interestingly, married people who have no children is happier than those who have over 18 age children.

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happiness levels forof married and unmarried society

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The highest percentage of excellent relationship with supervisor was under a third in 2005 while 2009 saw a very good connection at two-thirds. The intense of bond between colleague and manager decreased by 4% in the end of period, and then there are similar point in the poor quality of relationship only 2% from 2005 to 2009. The fair relationship with boss is slight decline of 2%, this number is same as workers who keep silent whereas staff who had no relationship with superior increased by a very small number (4%) in 2009.