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IELTS TASK 1 - A HISTORY OF TWO TOWNS



awe_28 25 / 10  
Jan 7, 2016   #1
The maps describe how two neighboring towns, Meadowside village and Fonton have changed over three different time periods beginning in 1962, 1985 and at the present. Overall, the Meadowside village has been expanded the area and has become Meadowside suburbs also merged with Fonton. In any case, there have been a lot of changes of the features in these periods.

Fonton and Meadowside village were completely separated in 1962 without any tools that connect them. Meadowside only had a small road that crossed it, whereas Fonton which located to the east of Meadowside only had a railway.

In 1985, there was a significant development in both of towns especially the size of area. There were some new buildings in Meadowside such us leisure complex, housing estate, and super store. Moreover, the road became larger and connected with Fonton by main road.

Currently, Meadowside and Fonton were united alongside with Meadowside that becomes suburbs. There was a new railway near a train station. While hotel was located behind the station, business park has been constructed in the opposite side of road.


  • A history of two villages


vangiespen - / 4077  
Jan 7, 2016   #2
The maps describe how two neighboring towns, Meadowside v Village and Fonton have changed over three different time periods beginning in 1962, AND COVERING 1985 and at UP TO the present. Overall, the Meadowside village has been expanded the ITS area and has MERGED WITH Meadowside suburbs also merged with AND Fonton. In any case, there have been a lot of changes of the features REGARDING THE TOWN FEATURES in these periods.

Fonton and Meadowside village were completely separated in 1962 without any tools ROADS that connect them. Meadowside only had a small road that crossed it, whereas Fonton which WAS located to the east of Meadowside only had a railway.

In 1985, there was a significant development in both of towns , especially the size of LAND area. There were some new buildings in Meadowside such us REPRESENTING A leisure complex, housing estate, and super store. Moreover, the road became larger and connected with Fonton by A main road.

Currently, Meadowside and Fonton were ARE united alongside with Meadowside that becomes AS suburbs. There was IS a new railway near a THE train station. While THE hotel was IS located behind the station, A business park has been constructed in ON the opposite side of THE road.


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