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Holiday in Vietnam - writing ielts 4.5

Linlincoi 1 / 1  
Sep 20, 2019   #1

the major - general doctor - why?

Currently, I'm a student at Hue University of Medicine and Pharmacy. My major is general doctor. I want to prescrible for people why I choose this branch of learning. I was born in Gia Lai but I have been living in Hue since 2018.

Well, when it comes to holiday in Vietnam, I like the most Tet holiday and it is a public holiday in Vietnamese tradition. The holiday is the time for relaxation and reunion with my friends and my family after a busy study year. I often take the chance to share with my parents about my life events in the past year. On Tet holiday, I make the preparations such as wrapping Chung cake, decorating the house. On New Year's Eve, the fireworks are often let off at some crowed point. We stay up all night to celebrate the turning moment and say out best wishes. The children are interesting when they recived red evenlop. People dress up in traditional costumes with attractive designs when they visit their relative or the pagodas. Everything is just so wonderful and amazing!

roswita116 16 / 37 17  
Sep 21, 2019   #2
Hi, there. I would like to advise you some tips about your IELTS writing.

If you want to improve your writing score of IELTS, you should make a clear writing structure. That is,

1.Overall meaning ( Paraphrase)
2.Main idea (Explain your reason and give an example)
3.Main idea (Explain your reason and give an example)
4. Conclusion (Without conclusion,you will never reach band 5)

Hope my advice can help you.😁😁
OP Linlincoi 1 / 1  
Sep 21, 2019   #3
Thank you for your feedback.
I really appreciated.

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