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The illustration depicts the information about natural loop of frog's life.



ibe13 36 / 38  
Nov 21, 2016   #1
The illustration depicts the information about natural loop of frog's life. Overall, there are four main stages which are occurring naturally, beginning with eggs to be the adult frog and the whole process begins again.

Initially, the eggs which are laid on the water surface come to form an embryo. After development period, an embryo becomes a tadpole, a baby frog. The tadpole has long tail and lives in the water by gill breathing.

Turning to the next step, the tadpole begins to change. It starts to grow hind legs, which are soon followed with forelegs. Tadpole's tail becomes smaller and it starts breathing with pulmonary, and preparing the frog for its life on land. Over the time, the tadpole has become even more frog-like. The tail becomes much smaller, and the legs grow. After that, tadpole frog becomes adult frog where the legs are developed and the tail has vanished.


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justivy03 - / 2265  
Nov 21, 2016   #2
Hi Bung, below are my thoughts on your analysis essay.

- ... the information abouton natural loop of a frog's life.
- ... four main stages which are occurringthat occurs naturally,
- beginningit begins with the eggs to be the adult frog and ...

- ... which are laid on the water surface of the watercome to formbecomes an embryo.
- After development period, anAn embryo becomes a ...
- ... and lives in the water, using their gills to breathby gill breathing .

There you have it Bung, I hope the above remarks are useful to your revision and for future writing reference, you need to work on your sentence construction and be very careful in associating your words as this will affect the overall outcome of the essay.
NinaJoesuf25 36 / 61  
Nov 21, 2016   #3
... natural loop of a frog's life.
... main stages which are occurring naturally, beginning ...

After development periodseveral times , anth e embryo becomes
... and lives in the water byusing gill for breathing.

Tadpole's tail becomes smaller and it startswith starting to breathbreathing with pulmonary, ...
... and the legs grow up . After that, the tadpole frog becomes adult frog wherewhich the legs are ...


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