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Which is more important to you?A Business Or A House



Yorgun95 3 / 4  
Jul 27, 2013   #1
You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which
would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.
First of all,you have to determine which one of these will be more important to you in the furure.
I think the business will become more important to me in the future.
Because as many people know that if you have a large income,
the rest will come later as long as you're not bankrupt,
I mean if you purchase a business , you get the oppurtunity to make more money easily as long as you're smart enough not to be bankrupt.

When you purchase a business,later on that you can expand your business that may make you more popular in your sector,
but if you chose to purchase a house ,
you don't have a chance like that.
So to make it clear(to sum up) i'd rather purchase a business than purchase a house due to the following facts that i mentioned at the beginning of my writing.

USNAGoal 2 / 6  
Jul 27, 2013   #2
Give more specific reasons why purchasing a business would be better than purchasing a house. You gave one example but it was an obvious one, try to get more in depth.
OP Yorgun95 3 / 4  
Jul 27, 2013   #3
I wish i could but this is the second time ive written something like i guess its called essay and i don't really know what more i can write ,mind giving some pointers how to improve my writing skill in English
Sara Elmessiry - / 2  
Jul 27, 2013   #4
business is more important because if one cares more about his business he will eventually get a good house , more harder work and more gorgeous business is more comfortable life as well.

the most adequate example for my opinion is Bill Gates, who because of his great business which is his invention of the microsoft he became the richest man in the world and thus he absolutely has good life and a good house. Gates drooped out from harvard the world best university and didn't care about the result ;however, when the microsoft dominates the pc-market microsoft company became the greatest company in the world and Bill Gates became the richest man as well.

another example is the Greatest composer Beethoven who cared about his business as a musician inspite of his complete deafness which led him to become the most famous composer and respected by many people
dumi 1 / 6793  
Jul 27, 2013   #5
Hi,
If this is for one of those writing tasks (IELTS or TOEFL), then this is too short. You need to have minimum 250 words in your response. However, it sounds like a speaking task question.
Sara Elmessiry - / 2  
Jul 27, 2013   #6
it is not a TOEFL or IELTS essay. of course i know that it is too short and it has no introduction or conclusion. I'm just giving a brief idea about what must written, and It is just an answer for the question


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