Writing task 2; Which institution should be responsible for solving the housing shortage?

Writing task 2 (housing shortage)

Some people believe that only government move can deal with housing shortage in some specific areas. In my view, I'm totally agree with this statement because every economic decision or rule that government made can affect the housing price standard and also housing shortage.

First of all, I believe that if government make a rule to limit the rate of birth, there is enough supply for the resident to own the house. In 2022, the world's population has reached over 7 billion people, when the population increase rapidly, it means a high demand of housing appears, but the supply is not enough for them. So the government should make a rule for their country to remain the population. For example, every family should only have a kid to control the daily bill and, it is enough housing supply for them to own.

Secondly, government can use the tax that the people pay through the daily bill to build the public house. In the modern world, everything has been taxed on, and it is a big amount of money just in a period of time so the government can spend that money to construct the public house. For instance, if people just pay 50 dollars for the tax and the country's population is 300 million it will be 15 billion dollars just to build the public house and government will sale it with the cheaper price for their resident.

In conclusion, I strongly agree that just government can solve the housing shortage because they can make the rule to limit the rate of birth and also build the public house by using the tax money.

The problem actually refers to "big areas" rather than " specific areas". This is a synonym phrase error that created an inaccurate prompt topic reference. Make sure that alternate word usage does not change the orginal foundation of the discussion. Good work on the opinion statement and reasoning summary. While not grammatically perfect, it still delivers a non. confusing basis for the writer's opinion.

The writer has a problem with his verb tense presentations. His tendency is to mix_up the references which affects the sentence structure with downward scores. He also misuses contractions in the presentation. He will do well to remember that contractions should be fully avoided in such discussion essays.

Serious grammar problems came into view when the reasoning paragraphs came into view. The writer could not present coherent thoughts as he seems to be translating word for word to English from his native language. This practice caused him to produce English sentences that do not meet coherent writing guidelines.

While the examiner will see that the writer understood the topic, the lack of cohesive and coherent reasoning will prevent a passing score from being given to the exam taker.

perhaps I see your essay is not long enough. Try to use more supporting sentence to consolidate your opinion. Update your vocabulary. Use more linking words to connect the ideas together. Grammar mistakes a lot you need to check it before hand in your essay