The Internet is becoming more and more central to our lives

The Internet is becoming more and more central to our live, as it provides more and more information, acts as interactive entertainment, and as a means of voting, etc... These function have obvious benefits, but there are dangers involved in the control the Internet is exerting over our lives.

- What benefits are involved ?
- What danger are involved ?
- How far do you agree or disagree with the opinion expressed

There are many different opinions about the Internet. Vast majority think that the Internet is really beneficial for people's lives. Meanwhile, other people say that there are dangers involved in the manage the Internet is using over their lives.

There is no doubt that technology brings many advantages. First of all, people can learn a lot of things through the Internet which contains most of anything. So, it is often said that the Internet is a best tool for education. Having connected the Internet, people can improve their knowledge well. Secondly, relaxing is also easier and more effective when people use the Internet. Listening music, playing game, watching video through the Internet is helpful ways help people when they are stress. Not only that, connecting with friends or family is really beneficial for people nowadays because of quick and convenient of it. These are just the tip of the iceberg. So, no wonder when people think that the Internet is crucial.

However, all things have two sides, and the Internet is not an exception. It also carries a lot of problem. The first thing to note is that there are many information which are not suitable for children can be found. A further effect is that more and more young people are tempted by games online and that is a catastrophe. These are reason people think that the Internet is harmful for life.

In my view, having had the Internet, people's live will be more convenient. However, they should not abuse it

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I think this needs a few structural adjustments.

Oh, thank you a lot

However, can you help me to correct my essay

for people's lives. →for people's lifes

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the last oneＩtyped wrong ----- sorry

people's live → people's life (that is what I want to correct)

First of all, the Internet provides people with easy and very fast access to any sort of information that cannot be accessed by using any other means ... Now give a specific example to prove this reason.

For example, today a person living in the Asia can immediately find out what has happened in the USA a few minutes ago with the help of the Internet.

Dumi has provided a more logical approach for you to come up with a nice essay :)

oh, thank you

oh, you sentence is really fluffy, and i really thank you