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What makes small businesses successful?



YAS20 1 / 1  
Jul 24, 2013   #1
It is an inevitable fact that the more any marketing becomes developed, the more success should occur.
Today's business is facing a strong competition which all traders are planning being better and bigger in.
Statistically most benefits in a business are expected amongst the huge ones, but by following some basic
rules a business can be more successful.

Vividly the first point to becoming successful in small businesses is to be unique. It means that whether a business
can be popular to make more profit depends on providing newer products. For example, Apple Co., which was not
as powerful as it is these days, started producing some different and new-tech gadgets. Because of following this not
too difficult rule, to be unique, Apple has been able to obtain the first position in market development.

Nowadays due to becoming busier than before, having better potential for providing more acessable services brings
about success for even a small business. Most people would prefer to buy a product for which its producer has better
services. Therefore a small company can find its niche in giving satisfying services to those that are considering this
issue. As a simple and well-known instance, there should study the processes that have made a profound, remarkable
reputation for Alfa Romeo Co. as a small car factory with the best services.

One of the other initial points is producing more resistant products. Why should not people choose a product that is
more durable? It is clear that how much longer a product can last even if it is used a lot makes it more well-liked.
Having good quality and strong material that results in an easier ability for everyone to save the money increases the sale
of that product, even though the producer may not be highly expanded. This theory is more highlighted in textile industry.
Shoes, pants, leather clothes, etc. producers steadily consider this rule.

Theoretically to achieve success for small businesses is to become bigger, but practically to be unique, have proper
services and use the best quality material to produce or provide anything being given to people are another motivation
behind this success.

dumi 1 / 6793  
Jul 25, 2013   #2
Well.... your sentences lack clarity. Your writing should be clear to the reader more than everything else. Try simple senetnce structures. Also, you need to pay attention to your essay structure.
OP YAS20 1 / 1  
Jul 26, 2013   #3
HI ear Dumi
I am so grateful for your consideration but I always ask myself that " why should we follow some routines and frequent structures in our writings?"

I am a veterinarian and I read some some scientific journals in which scientists write naturally. Bye the way I really apologize you for discussing

about this issue.
Regards
A.M. Aghili
dumi 1 / 6793  
Jul 26, 2013   #4
Bye the way I really apologize you for discussing about this issue.

.... well.... you don't have to apologize because this is a forum where people can discuss and share thoughts. There's no one to rule the other and we respect everybody's thoughts. It's up to you to accept others suggestions if you feel they are worth accepting. Otherwise you can disregard them. I provide my comments with an intention of helping others and it does not mean that others should follow my suggestions always. The structure I suggested above, in my view, is a more logical structure and also it has helped many people to succeed with IETLS and TOEFL examinations.


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