I would offer some suggetion to you regarding this essay.
It is just simple to understand the causes behind why some people assert with 'giving back' option for the richest person's.First and most significant is that they think once our basic needs have been met then money could be contribute very little to our overall happiness and well-being.In addition,providing assitance in terms of money ot in some other forms to poor people not only brings prosperity but also helps the nation to remove poverty.Takes an example of Apple chief executive,Time Cook,who certaily donated his estimated $785 million fortune to charity.Such types of investments assist a needy people's to fulfill their demands and needs like shelter for house,food for eating and clothes for wearing
1. Regarding this paragraph, you should extremely cautious in using the full stop and comma. Do not forget to put a space after full stop and comma.
2. It is forbidden to use the abbreviation in academic writing, it would be better if you neglect to us it.