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Money can be ineffective and counterproductive part of the job


okbu 1 / -  
Feb 11, 2012   #1
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. Use specific reasons and example to support your answer.

Some people agree that money is the most aspect of a job. But what is a matter of debate is that money is just a part of a job. No one will deny that a job can benefit us in many aspects of people's life. As far as I concerned, money is not the most aspect of a job. A job not only provides the means of sustenance but also a keen appetite for pleasure even in its simplest and most modest form.

On one hand, from my point of view, the most part of a job is the fact that job can provide pleasure. For example, scientists are those whose work and pleasure are one. Each day is holiday, and ordinary day holiday when they come are grudged as enforced interruption in an absorbing vacation. Obviously, for them, the significance of a job is not money. Also, it is clear that can provide previous experience. For instance, if a student has a job, he or she can learn amount of useful experience through working and through the job he or she will acquire some knowledge of how to get a good relationship with others.

One other hand, money for a job is not always a positive factor. For instance, if students have jobs while they are still studying in school, it may have a bad impact on their grade ---late for class for example. In fact, they get nothing but money. Only when they are accumulated abundant knowledge can they be confidently to say they are able to find satisfied jobs after they graduated from school. So, strictly required school attendance is one of the best approaches to helping students achieving the goal. Even though making money is also important, money is never made at the expense of studying.

In conclusion, though money is an important part of a job, it is likely to be ineffectiveness and even perhaps counterproductive unless there are corresponding improvements in some aspects that affect future development of individual's. As a matter of fact, it would be the contribution, pleasure that represents the most aspects of a job, not the quantity of money.
Athena - / 83 3  
Feb 11, 2012   #2
Some people agree that money is the most important aspect of a job. But what is a matter of debate is that money is just a part of a job. (I didn't get what you are trying to imply here) No one will deny that a job can benefit us in many aspects of people's life. is not beneficial. As far as I am concerned, money is not the most important aspect of a job. A job not only provides the means of sustenance but also a keen appetite for pleasure even in its simplest and most modest form.

On one hand, from my point ofIn my opinion,view the most part of a job is the fact that job can provide pleasure...
EF_Susan - / 2,364 12  
Feb 15, 2012   #3
Some people agree that money is the most important aspect of a job.

On one hand, from my point of view, the biggest part of a job is the fact that job can provide pleasure.

Also, it is clear that it can provide previous experience.

For instance, if a student has a job, he or she can learn amount ofgain some useful experience through working, and through the job he or she will acquire some knowledge of how to have a good relationship with others.

Only when they have accumulated abundant knowledge can they be confidentlyenough to say they are able to find satisfied jobs after they graduated from school.

In conclusion, though money is an important part of a job, it is likely to be ineffectiveness and even perhaps counterproductive unless there are corresponding improvements in some aspects that affect future development of the individual.

As a matter of fact, it would be the contribution and pleasure that represents the best aspects of a job, not the quantity of money.

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