Approximately 40000 visits were made to Music Choice in the first day ,whereas the number of visits to Pop parade was three times higher
.Till the eleventh day,the number of visits to Music Choice Fluctuated between 40000 and 60000
. In cont
rast,the figure for Pop Parade
declined to all time low by the seventh day,eventhough it recovered and reached
150000 visits in the 11th day.
It is interesting to note that there were more
to Music Choice in the twelf
th and thirteenth day (120000 and 111000, respective
ly) than that to Pop Parade.However,while the popularity of Pop Parade shot up to its peak in the 15th day with about 170000 visits,the figure for Music Choice slumped to below 80000 visits.
U need a conclusion at the end
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