When the new theatre is created, he can reach it quickly
If the new theater is created, he will reach it quickly.
The last thing
The last reason, or cause..
Second, people can find ways to make them funny and excited after normal work,
Another reason is to.... I didn't get the idea.. end it with a period instead of a comma
ok.. your organization is okay.. but you shouldn't write "when" you should use if instead because it MAY be built.. and you have to focus on the verb tense.. to make it unified and appropriate..