[IELTS TASK 1] Numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum before and after it was refurbished

Topic: The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided table illustrates the numbers of guests visiting Ashdown Museum in the year before and the year after its refurbishment. The two given pie charts describe visitors' contentment during the same two periods. The measurement in pie charts is percentage.

As the first pie chart suggests, before the reconvention, half of the guests had negative feedback. Meanwhile, there were only 10 percent of visitors very satisfied and nearly a third of them satisfied. The dissatisfied ones accounted for the largest part of the chart, which is 40 percent, whereas the smallest part belongs to the ones with no response, which was 5 percent.

After being remodeled, the number of visitors increased almost a quarter according to the table. The percentage of positive feedback also uplifted sharply, which took up three quarters of the whole, including over a third of visitors very satisfied and nearly a half of visitors satisfied. In contrast, there were only 15 percent and 5 percent of guests dissatisfied and very dissatisfied comparatively. The percentage of people with no response was similar to the previous year.

Overall, there were more people disappointed with their visit before the museum's reconstruction, while the contradictory happened after that. The proportion of guests with no response stayed unchanged. In the subsequent year, the total number of visitors upsurged. (218)

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