... According to the diagram, a wind turbine consistS
of a tall and strong steel tower, ... a wind sensor which sendS
information to THE computer. ...
..., the wind blow the blades as it rotateS
. ... then send the data recorded to THE
computer. As a result, following the rotation of the blades, THE
generator will produce up to 1.5 megawatts of electricity.THE
wind turbine can be planted...
However, it would
CAUSE damage in the landscape...
In addition, a domestic turbine can be constructed to generate THE smaller amount of electricity.
Generally, although installation of this technology can
BRING merit toward landscape, ...
Hi, Ikaa.. I have highlighted several errors on your writing.
Firstly, the incorrect verb form after modals,
this technology can brings merit toward landscape
it would caused damage in the landscape
don't forget : Modal + Invinitive
Secondly, incorrect verb form with singular subject
a wind turbine consist of a tall and strong steel tower
the wind blow the blades asit rotate
Finally, Missing articles (A, AN or THE) can be found many times on the passage.