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How often people bought or rented movies between 2002 and 2011 in a particular store



siddiqumar 15 / 8  
May 19, 2015   #1
The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart gives information concerning how many rentals and sales of movies according to a particular shop during nine years from 2002 to 2011. Overall, what stands out from the chart reveals that although the figure of rentals experienced the highest level at the first year, it had decreased gradually from 2003 to onwards. In addition, the sales of three categories saw a stark difference among them over the period.

According to the chart, in 2002, rentals of films stood at 181,000, while sales of VHS and DVD were just under 100,000, and blue-ray sales disappeared. A couple of years now, DVD sales had risen dramatically, and in 2007, it reached a peak at 215,000. However, in the same year, rentals experienced a decrease slowly. Also, whereas VHS sales did not seem, blue-ray sales appeared at around 10,000.

A more detailed look at the data provides that both rentals and DVD sales fell gradually. Apart from this, blue-ray sales increased slowly until the end of period. On the other hand, even though the gap between rentals and blue-ray sales had widened in 2007, the gap between them had narrowed again at the last year.


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Trias 23 / 27  
May 19, 2015   #2
Hi Siddiq,
Please find my feedback on your overview paragraph below:

The bar chart gives information concerning how many rentals and sales of movies quantitiesaccording toin a particular shop during nine years fromthe period 2002 to 2011. Overall, what stands out from the chart reveals that although the figure of rentals experienced the highest level atin the first year, it had decreased gradually from 2003 to onwardsuntil the end of period . In addition, the sales of the three movie categories saw a stark difference among them over the period.

Thank you, and keep on writing!


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