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People Costs on Certain Needs in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002



adrian21 15 / 17  
Mar 13, 2016   #1
People costs on certain needs in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002, measured in proportion, are displayed in the table. It is important to note that all countries had virtually similar priorities on their spending, whilst food/drinks/tobacco occupied the highest percentage and leisure/education was the least.

Looking on food/drinks/tobacco category, Turkey broke a record, at 32.14%, whereas its leisure/education needs was one-eighths, though still the greatest than the other nations. Calculating for a slightly lower level was Ireland. In contrast, Sweden was the lowest which almost a half of Turkey's, stood at 15.77%.

In clothing/footwear, there was the biggest percentage of national consumer expenditure in Italy, exactly 9%. A low level in this criteria was found in Sweden, at only 5.4%. Finally, all five countries allocated very low proportion in Leisure/education. Interestingly, all nations showed the same scale of prioritities, started from highest to lowest were food/drinks/tobacco, clothing/footwear, leisure/education respectively.


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hanimps97 3 / 4  
Mar 14, 2016   #2
Well, this body paragraph has covered what is being discussed in the overview, but I think you need a slight improvement.

Looking on food/drinks/tobacco category, Turkey broke a record, at 32.14%, whereas its leisure/education needs was one-eighths, though still the greatest than the other nations. Calculating for a slightly lower level was Ireland. In contrast, Sweden was the lowest which almost a half of Turkey's, stood at 15.77%.

Looking on food/drinks/tobacco category, Turkey reached the highest percentage at 32.14%. In addition, though its leisure/education needs showed one-eights, it still had the greatest proportion. Afterwards, Ireland experienced a slight lower level than Turkey at 28.91% while Sweden was the lowest which virtually a half of Turkey's, stood at 15.77%.

there was the biggest percentage of national consumer expenditure in Italy, CHANGES INTO Italian spent more money on clothing and footwear, and this has meant that this showed by far the highest proportion compared to all.


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