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Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to.



Ra_fhli 22 / 17  
Nov 4, 2015   #1
Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to. How true is this statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments?

Many countries which have beautiful tourism place is not merely obtaining a positive impact from the holidaymaker. They might be gaining many drawbacks such as assimilation of some culture, or the environmental pollution caused by rubbish. I do believe that this argument exceedingly true.

To begin with, one of the intangible thing is often neglected by several countries which have irresistible place, they tend to consider the positive sides than the negative impacts. Whereas, some people convince, tourism place also has some detrimental effects.

The common phenomenon that we can see around us is tourism place has already become one source to demolish natural culture in that region. It is because tourist around the world who came in those place have different culture. Also, by the increasing the number of traveler in that region, it leads to bad influence of the environment like the amount of rubbish mount significantly caused by the tourist.

Thus, the best way to decrease the negative effect that could be affected for the occupants or the environment, indeed the travel makers should maintain their kind behavior in every place that they visit like throwing garbage in its proper place. Besides that, those also are suggested before deciding to go to somewhere place, they have to look for the aiming countries in order to make adapted with the society. For instance, some countries might be do not allow foreign visitor to consume drugs in tourism place.

To conclude, I utterly believe that tourism place also has negative effects like broke up the original culture of the local society, and cause the environment pollution. On the other hand, the way to reduce that problem is tourists have to show good attitude wherever they are.

Bayuwibowo 48 / 62  
Nov 4, 2015   #2
Many countries which have beautiful tourism placeSis*are not merely obtaining a positive impact from the holidaymaker.
*refer to "many countries" (plural form).

I do believe that this argument is exceedingly true.
- after "that" s+v

hope it helps
RAJ57 3 / 1  
Nov 5, 2015   #3
Besides that , those also are suggested before deciding to go ...


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