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The position of a wind turbine is determining the amount of electricity produced.



alfinkurnia 33 / 42  
Nov 30, 2016   #1
The pictures show a wind turbine and it is optimal location to generate electricity from wind. The most significant facts to emerge from the diagram are that there has same parts when built in sea or land.

As can be clearly seen, a wind turbine consist of high steel tower where all another parts are installed on it. Another parts are blades which made by fibre glass, and even wood. After that, wind sensor which measure speed and direction from wind. Then, generate which has output until 1,5 megawatts. All of information from wind sensor are send to computer where it will arrange or adjust blades according data from wind sensor.

Furthermore, position of turbine is determine amount of electricity produced. Hence, wind on and is more strenght than on sea. Domestic turbine on sea also has only 100 kilowatts where a wind turbine on sea spoil landscape. So from picture we know the optimum location is on the land.

alovemarvel 2 / 2  
Nov 30, 2016   #2
The pictures show a wind turbine and it is optimal location to generate electricity from wind

"and it is" correct to "and it's"

Another parts are blades which made by fibre glass,

correct "another parts are" to "another part is the blades..."

Place your second paragraph first since it introduces the reader what a wind turbine is and how it works. Then explain why the optimal position for the turbine is on land.


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