IELTS Task 1 (Practice) - How many people used 3 major airports in NYC during their travel?

The bar chart indicates the numbers of travelers use three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000. Overall, LaGuardia was the airport with the most significant increase of passenger numbers over that 6-year period.

LaGuardia started with about 35 million passengers in 1995 and peaked at nearly double (70 million) in 2000. The raise of LaGuardia actually ran constantly about 5 million gap each year over 5-year period (1995-1999) from 35 to 50 million travelers. However, over the period of 1999-2000, the number inclined drastically with 20 million passengers only in a year.

Similarly, the number of people that used Newark airport increased gradually within the period of 1995-1998 from about 15 million to above 50 million passengers, and since henceforth it remained in similar number steadily. By contrast, the amounts of people who flight through John F. Kennedy airport during that half dozen year period were fluctuative. It rose from 20s million travellers before (1995) and fell to 30s million travelers after (1997) hitting a high at almost 50 million passengers in 1997. However, there was a 10% rise in this airport in the latest year period.

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Hi Febriyani, here's another take on your analysis.

- travelers who used three
- of passenger numbers of passengers over
- thatthe 6-year period.

- thatwho used Newark
- and since( this phrase is redundant ) henceforth
- it remained in a similar number
- steadilyon a steady phase .
- By contrastOn the contrary ,
- the amounts of people who
- flightfly through
- thatthis half a dozen
- year period were fluctuativefluctuated .
- It rose from 20s million travell ers

There you have it Febriyani, I hope the remarks and modifications help.
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