I have read our essay clearly and still found several mistakes.
you have pay attention on using inappropriate word, for example'
improvement of technology', it is correct grammatically but better if you said '
the advancement of of technology'. Several problems is also found on your structure, like in the second sentence of the first paragraph, there is no verb there. so you may focus on your sentence structure if you want to use complex or compound sentence. finally, you have to pay attention on your grammatical accuracy to boost your score.
E-books as a new sort of reading information, pay more attention in this sentence, in my perspective, it difficult to understand. i think eBook si not method of reading but one of media.
you may say reading trend.