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IELTS Task 1 The Problems Which People Will Get When Live Abroad



Faridadwi18 67 / 93  
Aug 25, 2016   #1
The bar chart displays about the calculate proportion of the problems which people have to face when they live abroad. Overall, the group which has much more problems is the middle age group. This group has the highest percentage in all categories according to finance, healthcare, and finding schools for their children.

Looking at the details, people aged between 35 and 54 has the biggest percentage of all groups in sorting out healthcare, at 37 per cent. This group also has the highest number in sorting out finance, at 35 per cent. The form which has the most problem to find out school for their son or daughter is the middle age group.

In contrast, elderly people always has the least number of all problems besides for sorting out healthcare which has higher proportion than people aged 18-34 but less than people in the late age group. The former group has the least number to discover schools for their children about less than 5 percent.


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azmi23 17 / 28  
Aug 25, 2016   #2
hi! i'd like to give you some corrections, hope you can follow through. happy writing!

Overall, the group which has much more problems is the middle age groupthe middle age group has much more problem than others who has the highest percentage in all categories, such as finance, healthcare, and finding schools for their children . This group has the highest percentage in all categories ...

... aged between 35 and 54 hasve the biggest percentage of ...

In contrast, elderly people always hasve the least number of (...) which has a higher proportion than people aged 18-34, but less than ...

here are some suggestions:
-don't forget to put comma
-try not to using "group" so many times


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