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Proposed change of Foster Road


agus_mono 13 / 23 2  
May 1, 2017   #1

significant transformation of the Foster Road



The maps illustrates propose alteration of the Foster Road from SE4TH to 85TH Avenue. Overall, it is interesting to notice that the Foster Road will witness a significant transformation which is more safety for pedestrian and cyclist than before.

First of all, the planner wants to expand the sidewalk in both sides of the road. Meanwhile, the care lane will be narrowed down because bicycle lane will be constructed in its both sides. This mean that the number of car is reduce in the road. The noticeable change of the road is also seen that it will be transformed from two-lined to three-lined road. Zebra cross will also be set up in the end of the road in front of the fuel station.

In addition, to improve the convenience of the area, several trees will be planted in the north and south of the road. These trees will shade the pedestrian.




syamsiahRahim 9 / 15 3  
May 1, 2017   #2
Hi agus_mono

I will give you some feedback
the care (car) lane will be narrowed down (pay attention with spelling)

This mean that the number of car is reduce in the road (I think this is your individual perspective while in the writing task 1 you should mention data that is provided in the diagram)

I think there also significant changes that you do not mention from the picture


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