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Reading books continuous/ separate ; Which is better?


nhip2912 1 / -  
Sep 30, 2013   #1
In my opinion, I prefer to read book in separated part than to read it continuously.

Because of two following reasons: The first reason is that I'm a slow reader. To understand whole story I have to read it carefully. For example, to figure out why there's a ghost in the phantom of the opera, I spent two hours reading two pages again and again.

The second reason: I'm a busy person. To manage time more effectively, I usually have a daily plan to work, to have fun with friends, to take care of my family. Only little time left for reading book so that I used to read 1 chapter each.

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dumi 1 / 6,930 1592  
Sep 30, 2013   #2
In my opinion, I prefer to read book in separated part than to read it continuously.

Well this is not clear at all. First, why have you written this essay? What's the purpose? I mean, is it for an IELTS or TOEFL task?

It's good if you include the prompt (topic) in the essay for us to understand what it expects from you. Please post the prompt and then we will provide you with our comments.


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