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question:
The table below shows the number of students living in the UK gaining English language teacher training qualifications in 2007/8 and 2008/9, and the proportion of male qualifiers.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This representative table provides information on the quantity of students in the United Kingdom who passed qualifications for English Teacher in two academic period, 2007/8 and 2008/9, with the percentages of the male student. Overall, it can seen that in all qualifications, the number of women is predominate more than men and the percentages of men is slightly decreasing in year by year.
In detail, the total of student remained stable in both years, but there was a significant differences between the each sexes. In first period, 2007/8, the quantity of male students only 24,7% from total. Move to more detail, stood at 6,870 of the male student took TEFL qualification compared to female who got three times higher. The gap became more significant for Cambridge UCLES, CELTA & other degree, which men only got a one in four of the women's total.
The trend was similar for the second period, but it is noticable that the number of male puppils was more smaller than previous period. In 2008/9, for Cambridge UCLES, CELTA & other degree, there was a drop of almost 10% in thenumber of male who gained this qualification compare to 2007/8 term. Although, there was not much changes in TEFL qualification group in this certain period.
question:
The table below shows the number of students living in the UK gaining English language teacher training qualifications in 2007/8 and 2008/9, and the proportion of male qualifiers.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This representative table provides information on the quantity of students in the United Kingdom who passed qualifications for English Teacher in two academic period, 2007/8 and 2008/9, with the percentages of the male student. Overall, it can seen that in all qualifications, the number of women is predominate more than men and the percentages of men is slightly decreasing in year by year.
In detail, the total of student remained stable in both years, but there was a significant differences between the each sexes. In first period, 2007/8, the quantity of male students only 24,7% from total. Move to more detail, stood at 6,870 of the male student took TEFL qualification compared to female who got three times higher. The gap became more significant for Cambridge UCLES, CELTA & other degree, which men only got a one in four of the women's total.
The trend was similar for the second period, but it is noticable that the number of male puppils was more smaller than previous period. In 2008/9, for Cambridge UCLES, CELTA & other degree, there was a drop of almost 10% in thenumber of male who gained this qualification compare to 2007/8 term. Although, there was not much changes in TEFL qualification group in this certain period.
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