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IELTS-TASK2 : Whose responsibility is it provide food for school children?



Nofrinorman 27 / 16  
Nov 28, 2015   #1
To learn effectively, children need to eat a healthy meal at school. How true this statement ? Whoes responsibility is it provide food for school children?

Children should consume a healthy food so that they can improve their learning ability. I believe that children health affects the effectiveness of youngster to broaden their horizon at school. Therefore, school management and government have a big role to actualize this positive circumstance, particularly children's parents.

School is a second home for children so that they should be provided healthy food for supporting the learning process. By doing so, it is supposed that children will not easily get sick and furthermore they can focus to learn effectively. For example, a 2015 study conducted by Georgea University found that consumption of O-mega3 can improve people's brain intelligence. It is thus clear that healthy food is important to be consumed by children.

Based on these, school management have to concern with providing healthy food at school which can be benefit for children's learning ability. Government also take this seriously for food supplies at school as they have a great power to execute a regulation for the avaliable of healthy food. This step will control every schools to provides a good quality of food. There is no doubt that children's parents should give them a package-meal so that they can consume a guaranteed health food. As a result, they will avoid to buy some unhealthy food at school.

To sum up, student's learning ability will be affected by the healthy food. Because of this, it is obligatory of school management to provide the healthy food. While the government also concern to the responsibilty of healthy food supplies, children's parents can prevent them to consume unhealthy food at school.

vangiespen - / 4077  
Nov 28, 2015   #2
Nofri, your argument relies too much on the idea of a public school feeding program. While I will admit that it is important for schools to provide their students with nutritious meals in their school cafeteria, and the government should take charge of that part of the feeding program, the main responsibility for healthy feeding lies on the shoulder of the children's parents.

Keep in mind that the schools generally supply no more than one meal a day to the students, normally a lunch meal. However, not all students are part of a free feeding program. Neither are they always given a food allowance to buy a nutritious lunch at school by their parents. A majority of the students pack their meals and snacks because it is more economical for parents to do when their children go to school.

That said, keep in mind that the children eat all of their other meals at home. Meaning, they consume the food that their mother or caretaker prepares for them. Now, whether this meal will be nutritious / healthy or not, depends upon the person preparing the child's food. The government and school does not have anything to do with that. So even if the school feeds the child one healthy meal a day, they cannot be sure that the rest of the meals will be nutritious for the child. Therefore, the responsibility for the preparation of healthy food for the children should be made the responsibility of the parents instead.

Therefore, while children should be able to eat healthy meals at school, we cannot say that that singular meal will be responsible for the learning ability of the child. That learning ability, if related to the food intake, should be the main responsibility of the parents since they are the ones who buy the food that these children eat outside of the school.


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