Unanswered [1] | Urgent [0]
  

Home / Writing Feedback   % width   Posts: 2


Rewarding students to improve their academic results



annahatef 30 / 8  
Nov 16, 2015   #1
I TRY TO FOLLOW ALL PERVIOUS TIPS GIVEN TO ME, PLEASE GIVE YOUR OPINION ABOUT DEVELOPING IDEA

Some teachers tend to reward students with high academic results. Others, however, support and reward students that improved their grades. Discuss both approaches. Give your opinion and provide examples.

Rewarding students may encourage them to study carefully. Some primary school staffs believe that students with high grades should take gifts, however, some other staffs consider that giving some gifts to students may increase their interests to study seriously. These are the two sides of the issue that will be discussed in this essay.

Studying the lessons is highly time consuming and students are not interested to study carefully. If students take A grade in different courses, staffs should give them some gifts. Therefore, other students may be interested to study and get good results. In class, the competition among pupils can force students to spend more time to learn hugely. What is more, when students with A grade are taken rewards, these students are introduced to other students who try to communicate with top students and solve their academic problems.

On the other hand, primary school students cannot understand about importance of studying. Primary students need to become motivated. Primary school staffs should encourage students by giving them gifts and tell students suggestions about better gifts which they may be taken, if they study seriously. In additions, by giving the same gifts to students, they become encouraged to help others and do not think other students are their reviles.

In the final analysis, giving the same gifts to all primary school students is better behaviors, because they do not become jealous and try to help other students to get better results in final exams. Also, students at primary school level cannot predict that if they study hard, they will be gifted by parents or school staffs.

iban 5 / 3  
Nov 16, 2015   #2
some other staffs consider that giving some gifts to students may increase their interests to study MORE seriously.

Studying the lessons is highly time consuming, and WHICH CAN AFFECT students are BECOME not interested to study carefully

If students take A grade GET A GOOD SCORE in SOME different courses, staffs should give them some gifts.

Therefore, IT WILL ENCOURAGE other students may be interested to study HARDER and get good A SAME results

In class, the THAT competition among pupils ATMOSPHERE can force students to spend more time to learn hugely STUDY MORE REGULARLY

On the other hand, primary school students cannot understand about importance of studying. Primary students need to become motivated

I can rewrite this sentence-> On the other hand, primary school students need more motivation from their teachers, since this motivation will help students to comprehend more about the importance of studying.

In addition, by giving the same gifts to students ALL OF THE STUDENTS THE SAME REWARDS, they become encouraged IT WILL PROMPT THEM to help EACH other and not think others studentsare AS their reviles RIVAL

Hope it will helps


Home / Writing Feedback / Rewarding students to improve their academic results
Do You Need
Academic Writing
or Editing Help?
Fill out one of these forms:

Graduate Writing / Editing:
GraduateWriter form ◳

Best Essay Service:
CustomPapers form ◳

Excellence in Editing:
Rose Editing ◳

AI-Paper Rewriting:
Robot Rewrite ◳

Academic AI Writer:
Custom AI Writer ◳