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"SCARED PLACE OF MACHU PICCHU IN PERU"


BAMS14 18 / 29  
Sep 2, 2016   #1
There is scared place in peru, siting hight in the andes mountains. The scared place had rediscovered by archeologist hiram brimingham 1911. The name of scared places is machu pichu or old peak in inca languages. The incas built precisely together from heavy block of granite fitted. Nowaday it place draw many tourists to visit it because not only scared place machu pichu have many marvels such as ancient ruins, spectacular natural, setting wonder architectural of incas etc. Tourist can acces machu pichu with more way but the most and recomended way from peruvians goverment is hiking. Peruvians government set of way and restriction to perserve environtment and ancients ruins.

Yusuf05 11 / 14 2  
Sep 2, 2016   #2
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Hello Bams,

If you don't mind to spend a minute for this, allow me to address my feedback here.

Don't forget the article to refer to uncertain place -> There is a scared place...
Careful with the spelling -> ...in P eru, sitt ing hight in the A ndes mountains.
"There is scared place in peru, siting hight in the andes mountains." I guess you intend to say "There is a scared place in Peru, setting highly in the Andes mountain ."

The scared place was rediscovered by archeologist hiram brimingham [again spelling] archaeologist Hiram Brimingham in 1911. The name of the scared places is M achu P ichu or old peak in I nca languages. The I ncas built precisely together from heavy block of granite fitted. Nowadays,itthe place drawattract many tourists to visit it because as it is not only regarded as a scared place but also has many marvels...

Tourist can reach Machu Pichu with more than one way, but the most recommended way is via Peruvians government by hiking.
...preserve the environment

That's from me.
Hope that help mate!
dinartika19 37 / 67 6  
Sep 3, 2016   #3
Hi Bams!

There is scared place in peru,Peru , sitingsitting hight in the andesAndes mountains called Machu Pichu.

The incasIncas built it precisely together from heavy blocka of granite fitted.

NowadayNowadays,itthe place draw many tourists to visit it because it is not only scared place machu pichubut alsohavehasmany marvelsmarvelous views

Tourists can access machu pichu with more wayin many ways

set of the way
Faridadwi18 67 / 104 13  
Sep 4, 2016   #4
Hi Bams,

There is a scared place in peru ...
... by archeologist hiram brimingham in 1911.
NowadayS it place draw many tourists attention to visit it because (...) pichu have but also many marvels such ...
Tourist can accesaccess machu pichu with more wayS but the most and recomended ...
Peruvians government set of a way and restriction to perserve environt ment and ancients ruins.

I am a bit confuse, what do you mean with "scared" in this essay?do you mean afraid or that is miss spelling of "sacred"?

It is better if also give the link so that others will also get the real article.
Hopefully it helps.


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