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Practice ACT Essay Prompt: Some high schools in the United States have considered creating separate classrooms for male and female students in subjects such as mathematics and science. Some educators think separate classes will be beneficial because students will be less distracted from learning. Other educators think having separate classes for females and males will not be beneficial because it seems to support false stereotypes about differences in ability between males and females. In your opinion should high schools create separate classes for male and female students.
My Response and Essay:
Imagine that a high school student receives his report card and sees that he is failing math. Is this because he was so distracted by a member of the opposite sex that he totally disregarded his school work? Of course not, but this is what many high schools are suggesting by creating separate classrooms for males and females in math and science. Creating separate classrooms for males and females will create more problems for teachers, students, and schedules while not reducing the problem of distraction in schools.
Teachers and students will have to deal with new problems that will arise due to this separation. Will teachers teach the males differently than the females? If so, isn't this the same segregation that took our country hundreds of years to get rid of? Instead of segregating skin color, the school system would be segregating gender. By nature this is a direct violation of the constitution. In addition, teachers would have to spend more time worrying about how they have to teach each class differently which takes away from time they could be using to help students learn. Furthermore, a difference in teaching leads to false stereotypes concerning the differences in ability between different genders. Not only will this hurt the ability of a teacher to teach but it will create even more distractions for the students. Other problems that could arise are scheduling problems. It would be much harder for schools to create a school day that will runs smoothly for students and teachers. A large school would run into many problems with scheduling and classroom size if separate classrooms were created in math and science for males and females.
Separating classrooms will not solve the problem of distraction in schools as a whole. The point of solving distractions is to try to improve students' grades. However, most students are not distracted by the opposite gender in schools so much that their grades suffer so dramatically. Most students who are doing badly in school simply do not care to do well in school. Separating the genders would not improve their grades. Students who do not care to learn will not improve their grades no matter how many distractions there are in school. Students who want to learn and get good grades will work through distractions. That will prepare them for their future also. In colleges and in work, there are many distractions that cannot be eliminated and the students that have not learned to cope with distractions will be much worse off.
Proponents for the separation of genders will disagree and might point out that many private schools are male only or female only. They will also state that students earn better grades in those schools. However, many other factors contribute to this. The students in private schools generally care more their grades as there parents are paying for their education. In addition, students in male or female only schools are separated all hours in school while public high schools are only considering this separation in math and science classes. If students are truly distracted by the opposite gender, then this would not be enough because of the distractions outside of those classes. Besides, the margin of grades between public and private schools are not black and white. They are in many respects almost the same.
Creating separate classrooms for males and females in math and science will not be beneficial and will create more distractions. Both teachers and students will suffer from the separated classrooms. Moreover students will be less prepared for the real world and college. Separating classrooms will create problems and will be unbeneficial for students and teachers.
Practice ACT Essay Prompt: Some high schools in the United States have considered creating separate classrooms for male and female students in subjects such as mathematics and science. Some educators think separate classes will be beneficial because students will be less distracted from learning. Other educators think having separate classes for females and males will not be beneficial because it seems to support false stereotypes about differences in ability between males and females. In your opinion should high schools create separate classes for male and female students.
My Response and Essay:
Imagine that a high school student receives his report card and sees that he is failing math. Is this because he was so distracted by a member of the opposite sex that he totally disregarded his school work? Of course not, but this is what many high schools are suggesting by creating separate classrooms for males and females in math and science. Creating separate classrooms for males and females will create more problems for teachers, students, and schedules while not reducing the problem of distraction in schools.
Teachers and students will have to deal with new problems that will arise due to this separation. Will teachers teach the males differently than the females? If so, isn't this the same segregation that took our country hundreds of years to get rid of? Instead of segregating skin color, the school system would be segregating gender. By nature this is a direct violation of the constitution. In addition, teachers would have to spend more time worrying about how they have to teach each class differently which takes away from time they could be using to help students learn. Furthermore, a difference in teaching leads to false stereotypes concerning the differences in ability between different genders. Not only will this hurt the ability of a teacher to teach but it will create even more distractions for the students. Other problems that could arise are scheduling problems. It would be much harder for schools to create a school day that will runs smoothly for students and teachers. A large school would run into many problems with scheduling and classroom size if separate classrooms were created in math and science for males and females.
Separating classrooms will not solve the problem of distraction in schools as a whole. The point of solving distractions is to try to improve students' grades. However, most students are not distracted by the opposite gender in schools so much that their grades suffer so dramatically. Most students who are doing badly in school simply do not care to do well in school. Separating the genders would not improve their grades. Students who do not care to learn will not improve their grades no matter how many distractions there are in school. Students who want to learn and get good grades will work through distractions. That will prepare them for their future also. In colleges and in work, there are many distractions that cannot be eliminated and the students that have not learned to cope with distractions will be much worse off.
Proponents for the separation of genders will disagree and might point out that many private schools are male only or female only. They will also state that students earn better grades in those schools. However, many other factors contribute to this. The students in private schools generally care more their grades as there parents are paying for their education. In addition, students in male or female only schools are separated all hours in school while public high schools are only considering this separation in math and science classes. If students are truly distracted by the opposite gender, then this would not be enough because of the distractions outside of those classes. Besides, the margin of grades between public and private schools are not black and white. They are in many respects almost the same.
Creating separate classrooms for males and females in math and science will not be beneficial and will create more distractions. Both teachers and students will suffer from the separated classrooms. Moreover students will be less prepared for the real world and college. Separating classrooms will create problems and will be unbeneficial for students and teachers.