greenw4y2 /
Aug 19, 2015 #1
Topic: What other skill(s) should schools focus on to prepare students for the workplace? Think of at least one idea and explain why you think this skill is important. (5-8 sentences)
I think the other skill that schools should focus on to prepare students for the workplace is communication skill. Most of students are future employees, so that they must have a strong communication skill, as they have to communicate with their colleagues and even their boss. Moreover, most of the current job requires employees to contact customers regularly. Effective communication skill is very important to prepare readable documents, to write clear emails for business partners and to state ideas in a professional way. In a word, communication skill is the other skill that schools should focus on to prepare students for the workplace.
P.S. Please help me check this paragraph? Are there any mistakes? Is it well-structured?
Thank you :"3
I think the other skill that schools should focus on to prepare students for the workplace is communication skill. Most of students are future employees, so that they must have a strong communication skill, as they have to communicate with their colleagues and even their boss. Moreover, most of the current job requires employees to contact customers regularly. Effective communication skill is very important to prepare readable documents, to write clear emails for business partners and to state ideas in a professional way. In a word, communication skill is the other skill that schools should focus on to prepare students for the workplace.
P.S. Please help me check this paragraph? Are there any mistakes? Is it well-structured?
Thank you :"3