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How to speak powerfully to make changes in the world.


fauziyahtami 22 / 38 6  
Sep 28, 2016   #1
TED Summary- How to speak so that people want to listen

The human voice is the most powerful sounds in the world. How to speak powerfully to make changes in the world. There are number of habits that we can avoid. First gossiping, speaking about the others flaw. Second, judging, people who judge the others is hard to be heard. Third, negativity, someone who had negative thinking will be hard to be listened. Forth, Complaining, people who always complaining cannot look for good reasons in their life. Fifth, Excusing, they are blaming on everything, put the responsibility to another people and then take the rest. Sixth, lying, people do not want to hear to something untruth. Seventh, dogmatism, it is difficult to be heard. The thing we could do to be more powerful to speak is to greet or acclaim enthusiastically. First, Honesty, being true and clear. Authenticity, just be yourself and standing in your own way. Integrity, being what you said. Love, wish them well, you will be hard to judge other people.

Lower your voices which mean you can associate powerful. Timbre, The way your voice feels like smooth and warm, you can practice making your voice comfortable to be heard. Prosody, root one for a conversation, makes a conversation more colorful and sometimes makes some divergent meaning. Pace, affect the speed of understanding. Pitch, attract people concern to you. Volume, some people ascend or descend their voices to pay attention. Be a powerful speaker and get convince listener, means creating and receiving.

Yonathan 46 / 65 5  
Sep 28, 2016   #2
Hi Faiz
Let me give you some advice....

There are (a) number of habits ...
... negative thinking will be hard to be listened.
The thing we could do to be more powerful to speak(speech) is to greet or acclaim enthusiastically.
Authenticity, just be yourself and standing in ...

... makes a conversation more colorful(colourful) and sometimes makes (make) some divergent meaning.

Thank you...
kiev 8 / 14 1  
Sep 28, 2016   #3
Hi fauziyahtami,
I hope you are doing good. You have a good summary, let me give you some suggestions.
How to speak powerfully to make changes in the world. is it a question or a title?
number of habits that we can avoid suggestion ' there are several bad habits of human being. (this is the main topic)
Your summary already used logical order however, you probably need to use other types of logical order such as primarily, first of all, next, initially etc.

First gossiping, speaking about the others flaw. --> First and foremost, gossiping is that individuals tend to spread other flaws without the real fact. (this is just suggestion)

The thing we could do to be more powerful to speak is to greet or acclaim enthusiastically. --> on the other hand, there are a considerable number of aspects to present a powerful speaking

Just all from me, Good luck for your next assignments/tests
Cheers


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