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Article Summary - The Best -and worst- places to be a working woman



Abrahamlincoln 54 / 50  
Oct 5, 2016   #1
The Best -and worst- places to be a working woman
The United Nation has published "glass-ceiling index" that aims to reports the most suitable place for women to work. Its indicators are higher education, labor-force participation, pay, child-care costs, maternity rights, business-school applications and representation in senior jobs. Unsurprisingly, the Scandinavia countries such as Iceland, Norway, Sweden and Finland-lie in top overall. In these regions, a woman has chance of equal treatment as men. Finland is the highest share of education compare with a man by 14%. Meanwhile, in Iceland has 44% woman on company boards. The least ranking of working woman is Japan, Turkey and South Korea where men have a tendency to fill a strategic position such as senior employee than a woman. Their salary gap is wide as well.

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eve01 24 / 21  
Oct 22, 2016   #2
hi Lincon ^,^

i have feedback for your summary

>>> subject + verb agreement ( to + verb1 withous S)

... that aims to reports the most suitable place ...
Itsthese indicators are

..., Sweden and Finland- lie in top overall.

... woman has chance of equalas treatment as men.

Finland is the highest shareing of education by woman compare with ...

Meanwhile, in Iceland (missing subject, preposition can not be a subject)it has 44% woman ...

keep writing broo (^,^)
inav321 6 / 35  
Oct 22, 2016   #3
Finland is has (...) compareD to a man by 14%.


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