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Article Summary - Hurricane Matthew Makes Landfall in Haiti



fadhilmd25 41 / 71  
Oct 4, 2016   #1
The Hurricane Matthew, which categorize as 4 type storm swept away southwestern coast of Haiti on Tuesday. The wind went directly to north Cuba and eastern coast of Florida with the maximum speed of 145 mph, where bring about 15-25 inches of rain, announced by a meteorologist from U.S. National Hurricane Center in Miami. He predicted that the storm made the East Coast beaches in hazardous condition. This was officially proved by the people who observed the roaring winds and massive waves sweeping the coast beaches in Port Salut. In addition, there was a report victim of tornadoes at least three people.

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Cited on: 2016 16 Oct

akbarmappiare 31 / 445  
Oct 4, 2016   #2
Hello Fadhil.
when you summarize an article or a video, you should give an introduction sentence about resource where you take it.
These are my thoughts for your summary


The Hurricane Matthew, which categorizeD as 4 type storm ...
... maximum speed of 145 mph, . FOLLOWING THAT, IT BRINGS where bring about 15-25 inches of rain...
... made the East Coast beaches in A hazardous condition.
... a report ABOUT victimS of tornadoes at least three people.
OP fadhilmd25 41 / 71  
Oct 5, 2016   #3
Okay thank you mr. Akbar for your concern


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