Summary Article - Indegenous 'Chola' Clothing Comes to Fashion Week

A Bolivian fashion designer present her local culture through fashion in the spotlight. "Cholas" is known as the local women who wear traditional clothes included hats, handmade macramé shawls, tailored blouse "Pollera" skirts and fascinating jewelry. As its fashion is popular among the poor women, she tried to show the essence of the fashion which can also represent the professional fashion in the spotlight. This is huge deal for her to show it in the international level.

The aim to bring up on the stage was to introduce new ways of "Cholas" as pattern clothing around the world. With the help of international atmosphere, she hoped that the new era of fusion between Bolivia and other countries design can last for long.

Hello, your essay is good. However, I would like to give some suggestions for it.

1. A Bolivian fashion designer present (presents ) her local culture
2. This is huge (a/the huge ) deal
3. it in (at ) the international level

Thank you

Hi Fadhil, I have read your summary and I thought some corrections will be essential for improving your ability in writing.

"A Bolivian fashion designer present her local culture through...
... local women who wear traditional clothes included hat...
This is huge deal for her to show it in the international level."

Using verb + s/es: if the noun is singular then you have to add s/es after verb.
A Bolivian fashion designer (singular) presents her local culture ...
"Cholas" is known as the local women who wears traditional clothes.
This is becoming a huge deal for her to show ... (I put word "becoming" and "a" so as to make a clear statement).

Thanks.