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(Summary Article) Only Rich Kids Should Go to College


AK354 7 / 8 1  
Nov 30, 2016   #1
What is only wealthy kids can continue their study to college? It's like an weird question. Many evidence increase about that, if you must borrow money to pay for college choose to work than take a higher education. Perhaps that only the rich (or those who get full-scholarships and grants). So it seem that only rich kids who can continue their study.

poorwriterhelp 2 / 3 1  
Nov 30, 2016   #2
@AK354
The grammar in this question makes it hard to understand what you're trying to accomplish by posting on this site. I wish I could help but I'm not sure what you need. Could you try again? I apologize.
faizunaa17 49 / 91  
Dec 1, 2016   #3
Hello Alvin, we meet again, waw, it was so amazing that you create new account, i hope it don't because your previous account was suspended right ? hehe.

What isWHY only wealthy kids can ...

1. You place inappropriate kind of question. What is ? or Why ? It has different meaning. I think based on your TED it explain the reason, so you must place "Why"

if you must borrow money to pay for collegechoose to work than take ...

PAY : VERB
FOR : Linking Word
COLLEGE : NOUN

CHOOSE : VERB
TO : LINKING
WORK : NOUN

2. You cannot make the sentence just like that. Bad Structure.


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