Summary Article - Speedy bat flies at 160km/h, smashing bird speed record

Speedy bat flies at 160km/h, smashing bird speed record

Brazilian bat has become the fastest vertebrate animal after reaching of speed nearly 160 Km/h. It disputes the previous finding which revealed that bird fly 112 km/h, which made them faster than a bat. However, the research carried out by McCracken's team believed that they have discovered outcome which people had not heard of. They also argue that their measurement is precise, using the speed device which is usually used for the airplane. It is clear that this result invites many disagreements from other analysists who criticized that there was something wrong on estimating process of speed. The first scholar who has a different tendency is Prof. Graham Taylor, he remarked that this is untrusted information which none should know. However, some analysts regard that bat could fly under 160 km/h because it was helped by gravitation force, impacting to increasing their flying speed. He added that this is very possible because the research object was Brazilian bat which well-known by its ability to travel far away almost 50 km.

Source: newscientist

Lincoln, your article summary should have been presented in three parts, just as the original article was presented.This is because the article discussion was divided into three parts covering the event that happened which is being reported, the assumptions as to how the bats gained so much speed, and then finally, the realization that the scientists had no idea as to why the bats flew that fast. That said, your summary does try to present most of the information in the article. Although, the presentation doesn't really leave the reader as informed as he could be due to way that you seemed to rush through the summary. When writing a summary based on an article that has sub topics in the discussion, make sure that you cover all of the important data presented in the sub topics as well. At this point, this essay informs the reader, but does not clarify the points that he will find himself asking towards the end of your summary report.

-......speed nearly 160 Km/h ON FLYING
-... revealed that bird fly 112 km/h, which ONCE made them ...
-... they have discovered AN outcome which people had not heard of. BEFORE
- .....usually used for ON/FOR MEASURING the airplane.
- ... other analysists who HAVE criticized that (...) wrong on estimating process of speed. ITS ESTIMATION/CALCULATION/MEASUREMENT
- ... has a different tendency VIEW/OPINION is Prof. Graham (...) this is untrusted/UNRELIABLE information ....
- ... that bat could fly underIS IT UNDER/AROUND/OR MORE THAN??160 km/h because it was IS helped by gravitation force, impacting to THE increasing OF their ITS flying speed.

... was Brazilian bat which IS well-known by (...) far away FOR almost 50 km.

Hello I will give my correction for you.

Brazilian bat has became the fastest (...) of speed around 160 Km/h.

However, several analysist regard that bat (...), impacting to increase their flying speed. He added that this is tremendous possible because the research's object was Brazilian bat ...