The table illustrates the television viewing numbers for tennis, golf, motor racing and athletics

the television viewing figures for sports

The table illustrates the range amount of television viewing for sports of each country. These sports contain tennis, golf, motor racing and athletics.

Overall, the country which has the most television viewing is USA with over 25 millions view. Tennis become the most popular sport compare to others. In Australia, people are interested in tennis, it is about 6.2 milions, opposite with athletics, 3 milions. In UK, a number of view is not rapidly. In USA, golf become the most popular sport for television viewing, it reach 11.2 millions. In contrast, motor racing is the least common with 1.5 millions. Like USA, Canada not have many view in motor racing, about 1.1 millions.

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I prefer if you add the countries in the introduction. Please refer this correction as a suggestion. " The table illustrates the proportions for watching 4 sports ( tennis, golf, motor racing and athletics) on television among people in Australia, UK, Canada and USA.

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