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Taklimakan desert occupy about 337.600 square km of northwestern China



Yonathan 46 / 50  
Sep 14, 2016   #1
Plant Life in The Taklimakan Desert

Taklimakan desert occupy about 337.600 square km of northwestern China and consist of sand dunes up to 250 m tall, daily temperature up to 68 F and lack of water. But some plant form has developed unique mechanism that adapted to extreme temperature and high-salt soil. For example, desert plants like Euphrates poplar has an extensive root that allow to absorb water far away. Otherwise, P. euphratica have ability to opening and closing the stomata for minimize evaporation and conducts photosynthesis. And Tamarisk plant, have high tolerance for salty conditions and produces its own salt for repellent another plant.

Although under extreme condition, desert plants have some benefits for ecosystem. For example, desert plants like Euphrates have extensive root and stabilizing sand dunes and preventing erosion. Otherwise, desert plants also becoming home and protect some animals in the desert from predator or extreme temperature.

rosadesiana 38 / 38  
Sep 14, 2016   #2
hi Yonathan,
here are my suggestions
keep writing !

==> Taklimakan desert occupyoccupies about 337.600

==> have(you need a verb) daily temperature up to 68 F

==>But some plantS form has developed ...
Abrahamlincoln 54 / 50  
Oct 7, 2016   #3
Hello Brother
Let me give you some advices

But some plant form has developed unique mechanism >> but some plant form have developed unique mechanism

P. euphratica have ability to opening and closing >> P. Euphratica has ability to be open and close.

And Tamarisk plant, have high tolerance for ...>> .... has high tolerance for salty conditions
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