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IELTS Taks 2 - People resist to changes in their lives/ Problems & Solutions


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Jun 10, 2012   #1
People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?

It is a fact that, at present, people tend to be accommodated to their life, to their daily routine. We all know that routines give us some comfort and stability which we are always looking for. But, on the other hand, the unknown of new things or new experiences may also origin the sensation of insecurity or uncertainly.

Nowadays, our society demands to have economic stability in our lives so, everyday, people are looking for a lifestyle that can bring up that feeling. With that gained stability during their life span, people may start to feel afraid and fear from any kind of change.

Indeed, as we can see in our society, people feel insecure when they try to change for a new job. They don't know if they will make new friends or if their new boos will be. Also, they feel insecure because they think they aren't good enough for that job position and they do not want to fail and make mistakes. For those reasons, people tend to stay away from new experiences in their lives.

However, from my point of view, everybody needs changes in their lives because we all need to feel that we are alive and we have a purpose in our society. To solve this issue of having fear, I think people should start to have changes step by step. For instance, people should start with little ones, such as visual change or changing their home decoration.

These little changes should encourage people to find other kind of changes, bigger changes.

I am sure that little changes in a person's life can keep away from fears and awaken the joy of new experiences. It is usual to have fears but people must fight them and not to feel trapped by those feelings.

nina2 1 / 5  
Jun 10, 2012   #2
you should give an example of real-life that has happened in your life or someone you may know. don't be broad about the topic make it interesting and tightly close.
land1111 5 / 12  
Jun 10, 2012   #3
I am sure that little changes in a person's life can keep away from fears and awaken the joy of new experiences
less or little ????

I think people should start to have changes step by step
start to have changes or start to changes ???

visual change or changing their home decoration.
visual change seems to include changing their home decoration. keep balance between 'or' and 'and' .

advise only
lovekayliex 3 / 3  
Jun 10, 2012   #4
I believe that you should use "though" instead of "but" in the beginning of your sentences.


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