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Talent or ability doesn't make courageous. IQ factor and children's intelligence.



gon10 1 / -  
Sep 16, 2016   #1
Summary Grit: The power of passion and perseverance

There is a debate in several years about factor that affect children's intelligence. Most of them belive that the greatest influence to intelligence is IQ. However, the differences between excelent student and under student is not only IQ factor. some of intelligent student sometimes weren't doing as such well and some student who have lower IQ can doing good perform.

In all those different contexts, there is a one characteristic emerge as a critical indicator of success. it wasn't social knowledge. it wasn't great looks, physical wellbeing, and of course wasn't IQ. It was Grit, which is enthusiasm and diligence for long-term goals with having stamina to catch your future become reality without stopping for even a minute. Grit is living life like it's a marathon, not a sprint.

Talent or ability doesn't make courageous. The information indicate obviously that there are numerous gifted people who just don't finish on their responsibilities. Truth be told, in the information, grit is usually unreleated or even conversely identified with measures of ability. Growth mindset is the best way to building grit in kids. This is a tought created at Stanford University by Carol Dweck, he's belief that the ability to learn is not fixed, that it can change with your effort. Dr. Dweck has shown that when kids read and learn about the brain and how it changes and grows in response to challenge, they're much more likely to persevere when they fail, because they don't believe that failure is a permanent condition. So growth mindset is a great idea for building grit.

David54 15 / 20  
Sep 16, 2016   #2
Hii Gon10,,

Just a little correction,

... years about factor that cause affect of children's intelligence. Most of them belie ve that the greatest ...
However, the differences between excel lent student and under student is not only about IQ factor . S ome of intelligent student...
.... grit is usually unrele ated or even conversely ...
... Dr. Dweck has shown that when kids children read and learn ...
mem77 62 / 93  
Sep 16, 2016   #3
Hello mr.gon, thank you very much for your essay and also i really interesting within your topic regarding Grit as a key factor for people than IQ and EQ. However, I have some notice for your essay to make it more good.

On your essay, you write "the differences between excelent student............" I think it is a right word, so i suggest you to change it with the right one, which is "excellent". And also, at the fifth sentence of second paragraph, you write "Grit is living life like it's a marathon, not a sprint." It should be replace because it was not grammatically sentence.

I think just it from me and also keep practice!


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