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TED Talk Summary: Patricia Ryan; Do Not Insist in English



korbansuspendcuy 8 / 13  
Oct 5, 2016   #1
A research from MIT indigenous Language Initiative showed that the total of language in the world today is 6000 and it will be predicted to decrease significantly into only 600 in about a century to go. While the language begins to disappear, at the same time, English becomes an undisputed global language.

This situation is likely a normal occurrence for our life now as the best education is found in the western county -UK and US-. Therefore, everybody wants to have western education and they attempt to learn English to pass the enrolment requirement of English test. It results in the notorious opinion that English language is changing from mutually beneficial practice into a massive international business and this condition is truly incorrect if the educational institution rejects applicants just because of their linguistic skill.

In conclusion, people should celebrate the diversity, keep all of native languages and use it to spread the great ideas.

ryan31 65 / 89  
Oct 5, 2016   #2
Hai pha
It is a good summary
I have some advice for you

.., English becomes an undisputed global language.

... as the best education iswhich found in the western ...

It results in the notorious gives opinion that English language ...
thanks


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