On account of this, people are arguing about is technology is helping people or leading people to a wrong way.
→ On account of this, people are arguing that whether technology is helping people or leading people to a wrong way.
Just talk about study. People don't have to learn knowledge from the school as before. There is a big amount of information in the Internet.
→ Take knowledge-studying for example. Many people rely on searching knowledge or useful information through Internet instead of reading books or asking teachers in the school. There is a large amount of information on the Internet. (The other example you may use is "Open course". )
If you look it up in the Internet, we can know the history from different people, different views. Online shopping is more and more popular nowadays.
→Besides, online shopping is more and more popular nowadays. ( I think you can try to add some conjunctions and adverb to make paragraphs neat.)
Try to explain your statements with more details and be careful with the words that you choose.