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[IELTS TASK 2] THEORY VS EXPERIENCE IN FUTURE JOB MARKET



hailung 6 / 18  
Sep 15, 2017   #1
In today job market, it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

I find this topic really challenging as I cannot express my points clearly throughout my essay. So I am desperate for help.

practical skills versus theoretical knowledge



Nowadays, employers are likely to employ applicants who have handy experience over those with good academic results. In my opinion, formal qualification will still be priorities in certain professions while it is less important in others.

On the one hand, a degree is an indispensable prerequisite to land a job in medicine and science. Complete of a four-year college does not only mean dedication but also proves applicants' ability to grasp and comprehend a myriad of knowledge. Medical students, for example, have to complete book study, laboratory experiment , mock exams and continuous assessments before they are trusted to provide care for patients. In addition, academic assignments also develop skills that are in high demand among employers. Interpersonal skills, presentation, writing, and collaboration all play a vital role that enhance their chance to seek employment and make progress in their future career.

On the other hand, there are certain jobs where formal education is not a priority. Employers in manual and creative industries are inclined to employ those who can really do the job rather than others with good academic background. The outbreak of online learning and the availability of tutorials on the Internet enable people to flourish their talent and land a glamorous occupation. The nature of their job, which promote individualism and independence, putting less emphasis on the development of soft skills which are the requirements of the bulk of other jobs.

In conclusion, formal qualification is important for those who seek employment in scientific fields, while creative industry prefer experience over theoretical knowledge.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15384  
Sep 15, 2017   #2
Kenzin, until you can learn how to differentiate between the different prompt requirements for an IELTS essay, you will never be able to properly respond to the given topic and discussion format. I keep on telling you, from the very start, I have told you to ask for clarification regarding the discussion instructions. Ask your tutor, ask your friends, ask your classmates, ask your co-reviewers, ask your parents, ask anybody who speaks and understands English enough to help you figure out how to discuss the essay. I am truly afraid for you now because I know that you are scared and you really cannot possibly pass the test at this point because you cannot understand the English instructions you are being given. The problem with your essay is always the same. You do not discuss it in the manner required. This is an extent essay and you are once again, discussing it as a 2 sided point of view and personal opinion essay. Even then, your personal opinion on the matter is missing. Once again, here is a sample of the proper paraphrase that could have helped you to properly discuss the essay:

In order to get a job these days, it is believed that one needs to have more practical rather than theoretical knowledge. That is why there is a belief that in the future, job applicants do not need to have academic qualifications anymore. I strongly disagree / agree...

Just pick one point of view to support and stop creating your own prompt instructions. Only when you stop creating your own prompt discussion methods will you even be able to inch closer to a properly developed essay in response to the given prompt. If you cannot understand the question, then you cannot properly respond to the prompt. I am sorry to say this but unless you try to develop your English comprehension skills, there is no way that you can pass the test. Spend time practicing your English comprehension skills. Work on just developing your opening statement presentations for now. I'll help you learn the tricks regarding how to better understand the original prompts. Don't focus on the full essay development at this point. It will be impossible for you to do that without first understanding what the instructions for the essay are.
OP hailung 6 / 18  
Sep 28, 2017   #3
@Holt

Hi Holt, I failed to response to the prompt correctly. My essay is likely suitable for a discuss both sides and give opinions.

Thank for your dedicated help


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