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The transformation that Dubai has undergone over the time



dollydorrie 1 / -  
Aug 20, 2023   #1

changes that have taken place in Dubai



The two maps illustrate various changes modifications. Dubai has undergone since the past to the present. Overall , Dubai has become a bustling city with a lot of vehicles and skyscrapers.

In the past, many trees scatteredly planted in a wide multi-directional road surrounding a gigantic roundabout. On the top right-hand and left-hand, there were a enormous empty fields with nearby few buildings. Along the two sides are rows of trees planted in a row.

Contrary to the development of today, the second one, we can see the fields have been replaced with more high-rise buildings, which has leveled the trees around the road. In the center, the traffic circular has been refurbished by many tall trees.

Moreover, the whole city has looked more modern and crowded as there has more traffic on the avenue.


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Aug 21, 2023   #2
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