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Transportation network after improvement - how much time is needed to repair transportation system?


Fadhilahumar91 61 / 73 6  
Aug 15, 2016   #1
The table give informations about how much time to need in the center of city after transportation system had repaired. The fastest vehicles after the system of transportation improved by taxi. And the bar chart present informations about ordinary cost per kilometer by using vehicles. The most expensive cost is using the taxi. The most significant fact to emerge from the table and the chart are that using the taxi is the fastest vehicle to city center. Although, it is the most expensive charge.

The important to know that after transportation network has repaired, it decreasing the time it needed to downtown when using the tram. It needed 16 minutes to downtown. Although, the taxy has increase of time to city center. But, it still the fastest vehicles in the city.

In other hand, the chart shows the normally cost in every transport method to downtown. The most expensive cost by using taxi, and the cheapest is bus. Also, using the tram to travel in city center is the cheaper than using the car

azmi23 17 / 28 3  
Aug 15, 2016   #2
hi fadhila! here are my suggestions related to your essay.

The table giveshows informations about how much time tois needed in the center of citycity centre after transportation system had been repaired.
The most expensive cost isby using the taxi.
Although, it is the most expensivehighest charge.
Iforsa 35 / 54 5  
Aug 15, 2016   #3
hiii dila here some comment from me after read your essay

The table give gives informations information (information is uncountable noun) about...

The fastest vehicles after the system of transportation improved by taxi your sentences is hard to follow
The fastest vehicle after transportation system was improved is taxi

And the bar chart present informations about ordinary cost per kilometer by using vehicles. .
we cannot use and at the beginner of sentence.
The bar chart presents information about the ordinary cost per kilometer by using vehicles.

thank you


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