Travel around a city - IELTS WRITING TASK 1: The table and bar chart

time to travel around a city

The table shows how long it takes to travel around a city before and after the transport network is raised. Also, the bar chart presents how much it costs to travel to other forms of transport in the city.

Using the tram will most greatly go down the amount of time. It cuts the time down from 22 minutes to 16 minutes. Similar to the tram, the bus is slightly faster than before. But even so, it still takes 23 minutes. Even after the fastest forms of transport have grown, taxis are still 3 minutes slower. However, taxis are getting to the quickest mode of transport in the city.

By contrast, the bar chart reveals taxis are the most pricey means of transport, spending nearly Є1.80. The car that costs around Є1.00 will be on the following list. While trams and buses are less expensive, charging almost as much as Є0.40 and Є0.20 each.

Overall, traveling by bus or tram is always slower than using a car or taxi, but they have a lower price.

One more useless thread title = BAN

I am not sure what you mean by"raised" in reference to the city transportation. Since there is no image for comparison to your statement, I am left confused by that sentence. In an actual test, you will receive deductions for every confusing sentence written. Such GRA problems will result in a failing score for that section. Always assume a lack of image on the part of the audience then formulate the report accordingly.

There is no need to reference the other image as "also" since it does not refer to information related to the first image. The nest image should have a different and stand-alone presentation. The wrong connecting word or transition reference was used in this case.

Overall, the writer has not developed an understandable analytical uport. He has clearly shown that he has a problem when it comes to English sentence development and word usage. These are areas of concern that he must focus on.