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The two maps illustrate the changes of theater in the year 2010 and 2012.



cavoixanh 1 / -  
Jul 7, 2023   #1

The two maps illustrate the changes of theater in the year 2010 and 2012.



Overall, there have totally renovation includes expansion and addition of some facilities.

As can be seen from the map, the stage has been doubled in size to the north. There is a dressing room replacing the storage in the left wing which moved down from the top of the stage. Furthermore, an immediate shower was also built when the storage was moved.

Addition, in 2010 auditorium accessed via 3 doors, one of which from outdoors, but in 2012 this has been blocked to the northwest. An admin office and the ticket office were expanded to the south, at the same time, the cafe was built to the north. Later 2 years, the south area was completely converted into a restaurant while the coffee was replaced by the ticket office.

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Jul 10, 2023   #2
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