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Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus.



QuangTa 1 / -  
Jul 21, 2024   #1
Higher educational institutions are having a tendency to virtualize their classes through teaching videos. In my opinion, this is an advantageous approach to the world education.

There are several merits of replacing in-school classes by online courses. Firstly, virtualized university classes would give students a heighten level of comfort. This satisfaction deprived from the fact that students could not only freely choose to turn up the teaching records at any time right at the comfort of their home but also not to physically appear at class. Educational outcome might be enhanced thanks to the increasing comfort. Furthermore, the virtualization of university education might be cost-effective since students do not have to commute to university or rent an apartment if they attend a university far from home. Therefore, decreasing financial burden paves the way for family with lower income send their children to university.

Secondly, thanks to this profound development, geographical barrier is eliminated since through the computer's screen, students worldwide are able to gain access to the education of any foreign universities. For example, many universities take advantage of internet-based studying websites such as coursesa,... to provide free online courses for everyone over the world not only their students. This global provide of education does not only increase a specific university's reputation but also advertise how excellent native country's educating process is.

In conclusion, that virtual classes are in replace of traditional ones are beneficial in terms of students 'comfort, financial issues and global access to education.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15385  
Jul 24, 2024   #2
This is an automatic failing essay since it only has 247 words in it. The main word requirement is 250 words. There will be deductions applied for the missing word count that will adversely affect the final score.

such as coursesa,...

This is incorrect sentence formatting. You cannot use a comma and then ellipses when indicating only 1 information point. A comma is used to indicate a series of common or similar information listing. As per proper English sentence structuring, you can only use 1 punctuation mark at a time as well. So the GRA score for this essay will have further deductions due to the errors in this particular sentence.

The concluding summary paragraph is only 1 sentence long. It should be composed of 2 sentences, using a total of 40 words at a minimum to qualify for full scoring consideration in the overall presentation.


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