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The line chart regards to comparison rate of Canada university graduates in men and women from 1992 to 2007.
As an overall trend, it is clear that the graduate numbers inclined during one and half decades and the gap between the number of men and women grew extensively from year to year. Furthermore, woman always dominated the proportion of the graduation.
A more detailed, look at the graph reveals that the growth experienced fluctuation. The graduate numbers increased steeply between 1992 and 2001, and the ratio between male and female was flattened as well thus showing less marked difference. In 1992, only below 100,000 females and 70,000 males graduated from university and considered as the lowest number graduations over those 15 years. After 2001, however, those numbers saw an extremely stronger increase than those seen in the early 1990s then continued to reach their peak in 2007.
Clearly, the trends of both female and male graduations were similar, but females increase a bit more quickly.